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Late one night, Martin received a phone call.
"I am Mr. Trevor, the lawyer of your great-uncle James. I'm sorry to inform you he passed away last week. He left all his belongings to you, his only nephew. I need you to sign the documents for the transfer of property. When and where could we meet?"

Martin answered: "Anytime you want, and anywhere you want, if you have internet connection."
Trevor said: "OK!, How about in 10 minutes, on Skype?"
Martin answered: "OK, my account is MartinMartin. I am waiting for your call."
After Martin hanged up, he turned on TV. A few seconds later, the screen switched from the baseball game to the news.
The reporter said: "This is a report from NASA, we received a message from astronaut Gagarin a few minutes ago.

Uncle James had told a story to Martin about his friends at NASA. Even if uncle James held a high position, was a humble person. When he died, many people at NASA were sad. Uncle James had found a chip in a cave, that's also why he was very popular at NASA.

Astronaut Gagarin said: "Hi Martin. May I join the Skype call with you and Trevor? I have a message that your uncle James gave me before he died."

The private conversation started. Gagarin said hello to Martin, and continued, "Look, as you know your uncle was a geek. He left an account called winky45. He wanted you to open it after he died. Be careful, the chip had already been activated when he was alive. What you need to do is just to complete it."
After the private conversation, Gagarin told it in public, to let the fans know what James had left before he died.

Martin opened it and found iPhone. He received a call from Gagarin.
Martin heard it from the news on TV and the iPhone at the same time, "Hello everyone, this is a message from Mars. As you know, today, we humans have finally reached Mars using uncle James' system. Mars is red…."
That was the moment that Martin decided to become an astronaut.

Goemon Edman
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before corrections

Late one night, Martin received a phone call.
"I am Mr. Trevor, the lawyer of your great-uncle James. I'm sorry to inform you he passed away last week. He left all his belongings to you, his only nephew. I need you to sign the documents for the transfer of property. When and where could we meet?"

Martin says: "Anytime you want, and everywhere you want if you have internet connection"
Trevor says: "OK!, How about 10 minitues later on Skype?"
Martin answered: "OK, my account is MartinMartin. I am waiting for your call."
After Martin stop call, he turn on TV, and few second later, screen changed from baseball game to the news show..
New reporter said: This is report from the NASA, we got message from astronaut Gagarin few minutes ago.

Uncle James have been told a story about his friends in NASA. Even uncle James has a high position, but he's a humble person. When he death, many people in NASA are sad. Uncle James found a chip in a cave, so that's why he is very popular in NASA too. NEXT

Astronaut Gagarin said "Hi Martin. May I join to Skype call with you and Trevor? I have a message that your uncle Jamese gave me before he died"

The private conversation starts. Gagarin say hello to Martin and he said, "Look, as you know your uncle was a geek, he left and id winky45". He wanted you to open it after he died, becareful the thing already activated when he was living. What you need is just complete it. After the private conversation, Gagarin tells in public to let the fans know what James left before he died.

Martin opened it, and found iPhone, and he got call from Gagarin.
TV show and iPhone speak at the same time, "Hello everyone, this is message from Mars, as you know, today we human, finally reached to the Mars by using uncle James way. Mars is red…. blah blah blah"….
Anyway, Martin decided to become an astronaut from now.