Story writing class: Sunday at 7am PDT
At the end you can read the story before corrections.
It happened a long time ago, but Tina can remember it as if it were yesterday.
It was late, she was getting ready to go to sleep, when Paula, her neighbor, knocked at her door.
She couldn't find Fluffy, her cat. She was desperate. She asked Tina to help her look for Fluffy around the neighborhood.
Tina told her neighbor: "Oh, I have not seen Fluffy for a couple of days". She thought that it was important for Tina to find her pet.
Tina felt the desperation in Paula's voice. She grabbed her coat and went with Paula to look for Fluffy. The two women were searching the neighborhood in the middle of the night. They were calling Fluffy's name in the quietness of darkness.
Tina spent hours calling Paula´s cat in Spanish, but she was wondering whether the "beast" could understand her...as Fluffy was used to English. Tina though that the situation is was surreal.
There was a small house nearby, but Tina didn't like it because it looked creepy. Near the house they could hear a sound, like a cat's scratching, but they weren't sure. They tried to approach the small house, even if they were afraid. "Fluffy... come out, my good kitty". Suddenly, the shadow of a cat appeared. "Oh look Paula, Fluffy is there. The kitty came close to them.
Paula held her dear cat in her arms and said: "Thank you very much Tina, I´m so happy." After all what had happened, the two girls were tired and they decided to go back home. But before they left that old house they could see a dark shadow, and it seemed to be a man who was slowly coming toward them.
