Story writing class: Sunday at 7am PDT
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It said: "Do you want to become happy, rich, famous and loved? Click on the link to find out how."
She was intrigued by the words inviting her to click on the link. She stopped for a moment and tried to remember if she had updated her antivirus, her hand was trembling holding the mouse. "I need to know what this link is about" she thought.
But recently, she had been having she is bad luck. She wanted to change her life. So she clicked the link.
When she clicked the link, she heard a bad sound, like a monster sound. It went on for five minutes. She was shocked.
"This is your lucky Day" the sound kept repeating. She did not feel lucky because the sound frightened her. She clicked the pause button and read the whole page. There was a picture of a handsome man half naked.
The handsome man was a celebrity well known by many people. "He must have taken a selfie and posted it without realizing that his picture would become public. What a shame!"
The text below photo said "If you want to see more naked handsome men, click on this link". She clicked on the link.
Her heart was beating faster, her hand was trembling, she lost her mind.
What happened next was unbelievable. Goemon walked in the door while she was viewing the explicit photo of a half-naked man. Goemon shouted " What in the name of God are you doing?" She said: "I'm ,I'm , mmmmmm, well you know.
She said: "This is homework…., I don't like this, but the professor gave us this link, I need a credit…"
She was doing the homework while giggling. She found a good topic for the picture.
"What I need is six pack abs". While she was writing her homework, she was thinking about good ideas to make it unique.
Goemon let her continue her secret activity. He thought: "What a pity, she completely lost her mind. If only her boyfriend would return to her."
He closed the door gently and glanced to where she was sitting. He was saddened by this sight.
Saddened he was yet the girl looked eager to continue what she was doing. She was now by herself but this time, Giovanni came in looking for his glasses. He had no luck in finding them all day and to add to his worries, he was late for his class in Second Life.
The title of her course name was: "Psychology: Why some people click on the link in the spam mail". This course is great. I studied why people click the links in spam mail.. I heard this course will be a public course on Coursera next year. I recommend you take it.
She was spending her time trying to understand the character of a person who is sitting behind the computer. She found out that people are attracted by eye catching titles and ideas. In the end, she got A and was recommended to a famous magazine. She felt proud because she came from a poor family, and now she could feed her family too.
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One day, Lisa received an email with the subject line: "The best opportunity of your life".
It said: "Do you want to become happy, rich, famous and loved? Click on the link to find out how."
She is intrigue with the words inviting her to click on the link. She stop for a moment and think if her antivirus is updated, her hands is trembling holding the mouse, " I need to know what's on the link" she thinks.
But recently she is bad luck. And she want to change her life. So she clicks the link.
She's shock when she's clicking the link, it appears bad sound like monster sound. It keeps repeating during 5 minutes.
"This is your lucky Day" the sound keeps repeating. She does not feel lucky because the sound frightened her, she clicked the pause button and navigate the whole page. There was a picture of a handsome man half naked.
The handsome man was a celebrity well known by many people. He must have taken a selfie and posted it without realizing that his picture would become public. What a shame!
And the text below photo says "If you want to see more naked handsome man, click on this link". And she clicked on the link.
Her heart beats faster, her hand was trembling, she lost her mind.
She said "This is homework…., I don't like this, but professor give us this link, I need a credit…"
She was doing the homework while giggling. She found a good topic for the picture, "what I need is six pack". While she's writing the homework, she was thinking about good idea to make it uniquely.
Goemon left her to continue with her secret activity, he thinks "What a pity, she completely lost her mind if only her boyfriend would return to her." He closed the door gently and glanced to where she was sitting. He was saddened by her sight.
Saddened he was yet the girl looked anxious to continue what she was doing. she was now by herself but this time, her Giovanni came in looking for his glasses. He had no luck in finding them all they and to add to his worries, he was late for his class in Second Life.
Anyway her course name is "Psychology : Why some people click on the link in the spam mail". This course is great. I studied why people click the link in spam mail.. I heard this course will be public course on the Coursera next year. I recommend you to take this.
She was spending her time to understanding the character of person who sitting behind the computer. She found out that people should make eye catching title and idea. In the end, she got A and recommended to famous magazine. She felt proud because she came from poor family, then she can feed her family too.
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