Is SHIMPO good for you?

Story writing class: Sunday at 7am PDT

At the end you can read the story before corrections.

Two days ago, Jim went to the supermarket to buy groceries. He asked the store clerk where he could find SHIMPO, a new snack he had seen advertised on TV.
"Go to aisle 13." - said the clerk.
When Jim stepped into aisle 13, he was blinded by a bright light and heard a deep, loud voice.

There were many colorful foods
He was surprised. They didn't look like normal food colors.

Jim was afraid of the voice. He thought it was an explosion. He saw more glass bottle fall on the floor and make a big mess.

Suddenly, a small robot popped out of a bottle in front of him. He was surprised and speechless, "What was that? A genie in the bottle?" The bright light turned into a cloud.  "Am I in heaven?"

Quiz 39

This week the winners are....  

Jan71 and Cimmiaw 

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You got one point!!

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Quiz 38

This week the winners are....

Beadyneo,  Princess Anna , Joey Dhara, and Laci Coy

CONGRATULATIONS!!! 

You got one point!!

And here it is the new Quiz, Try to answer all the questions, you can win a free lesson!!

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Bill the Rocket

Story writing class: Sunday at 7am PDT

At the end you can read the story before corrections.

My name is Ralph Ross. I am a policeman. During each work day I see horrible people doing horrible things.
When I come home at night I want to forget all about it, so I log in to Second Life to relax exploring new places.
One night I fell asleep in front of the computer and I was woken up by the sound of a new IM.
It said, "Ralph, I am in trouble for real. I need your help."
The doorbell rang.

I went to the door, looking at the security devices and said, "Who is it". A man said, "It's me, Ralph, please help me!".

Ralph said, "Your right leg and right arm seem broken.What happened?"

The man whispered, "My name is Bill." Then I saw his face become white.

Ralph let Bill into the house. "I haven't seen you for ages, where have you been?" Then Bill began to tell him, "Two years ago I fixed someone's computer, and long short story I ended up in jail. I think someone tried to kill me."