Story writing class: Sunday at 8am PDT
At the end you can read the story before corrections.
Still in shock, Mika went to meet Sama at the mall, and told her about what had happened. Sama opened her handbag to take out her wallet to pay for coffee and she found Mika's phone. They were both speechless.
Mika took her phone back and made another call to see what would happen.
Mika started to check the call list and she found a strange number. She called this number.
The number was busy. She waited a little while and dialed the number again. This time it rang and a female voice answered the phone.
She tried to find out who that lady was. She came to know that that lady was a magician who knew a trick. Whoever received her call lost her phone and it went into the bag of the whom they phoned.
She said that her name was Tasya and something absurd in her voice made Mika think she worked in high-tech.
Then she said something which shocked her: Tasya said she was calling from 2020.
There was a voice that sounded like a count down: 2019.. 2018..2017.......2013
The phone in her hand radiated red light.
After that it stopped working.
After the red light stopped, Mika heard Sama's voice saying words she could not understand. Mika lifted her head and saw a different Sama in front of her. Her face was white as snow and her lips were red as cherries.
Suddenly Sama saw white waves on Mika's head. "Something came out from the white waves, Mika." Sama said. Then Sama took Mika's hand and dragged her to the corridor. Tanya showed up in front of them.
When Tanya saw Tasya, she shouted: "Hello Tasya, long time no see."
Mika thought that there was something tricky in what was happening, something was very strange and incredible.
Tasya was beaming, with smile on her face. There was a trace of apprehension on the faces of Mika and Sama but all became clear to them when they heard the familiar voice of Tasya. They both ran to Tasya, embraced her tightly and in unity said: "We missed you, Mother."
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Before corrections
Mika called her friend Sama with her cellphone. They made an appointment to go shopping at the mall. When she hung, up her phone disappeared from her hand.
Still in shock, Mika went to meet Sama at the mall, and told her about what had happened. Sama opened her handbag to take out her wallet to pay for coffee and she found Mika's phone. They were both speechless.
Mika took her phone back and made another call to see what would happen.
Mike started to check the last contacts, She found a strange number in received call , She called this number.
She the number was busy. She waited a little while and dial again the number this time it rung and a female voice answered the phone.
She tried to find out who that lady was . She came to know that that lady was a magician and she knew this trick. Whosoever received her call lost her phone and it reached the bag of peron whim they phoned.
She said, her name was Tasya and there was something absurd that her voice was very clear like she was in high technology. Then she said something which was made her shock that she was in the future like 2020.
there was a voice look like a count down timer, 2019.. 2018..2017.......2013
the phone in her hand Radiated Red Light
After that it stopped working anymore
After the last red light stops, she heard Sama's voice saying words she could not understand. Mika lifted her head and saw a different Sama in front of her. Her face was white as snow and her lips is red as cherries.
Suddenly Sama have seen white waves on Mika's head. "Something came out from the white waves Mika, said Sama!".Then Sama took Mika's hand to dragged her to the corridor. And Tanya showed up in front of them.
When Tanya saw Sama, She shouted and said " Hello Tasya, Long time didn't see you. "
Mike thought that there was some tricky in what was happening, Some thing was very Strange, and incredible.
Tasya was beaming with smile on her face. There was a trace of apprehension on the faces of Mika and Sama but all became clear to them when they heard a familiar voice of Tasya. They both run to Tasya, embraced her tightly and in unity said: We miss you, Mother.
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